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I’m not fond of graphic sex either. I might hint at it or show the start of it but usually that’s it.
As for egg laying, I think I did mention the organ, cloaca, that does that, but not too much more detailed.
And I only usually do that in my more grown up ones. (Sorry I kinda overreacted about teh Littlefoot dying one. Didn’t get much sleep and somehow thought that it was your idea.)
Nonetheless, the idea of Littlefoot dying, though opposed to it, did give me an idea for my planned LBT finale, the Four Kinds Quest.
As you know, in the original, it almost did seem as if Littlefoot did want to die for a while as he didn’t eat and just moped around, sad about his mother’s death. Eventually, however, his desire to get to the Great Valley, as his mother had requested, overrcome his despair and he went and eventually got to the Great Valley.
In Four Kinds Quest, however, he doesn’t have that anymore. After an incident leads to his lifetime banishment from the place, and him thinking that it’s possible that Chomper went rogue and killed Doc and the Old One and that Strut and some other Egg Stealers had gone rogue and stolen and eaten eggs and that it was all his fault for doing the Four Kinds Quest in hopes of ending the segregation of the Leaf Eaters worldwide. Also, he again blamed himself and his desire to do the Four Kinds Quest for his mother’s death.
He travels back to the Great Divide, though not alone, as Pterano and Etta came with him, as did two Great Valley kids that snuck out after him. However, like before, only worse, he doesn’t really take care of himself and gets very low on food and water (partially to keep food for the kids as there is a famine again.) and finally reaches the spot where his mother died. He lies down, planning to just, as he hopes, die in his sleep, and his mother speaks to him in a dream. He can see her and asks if he is dead and she says not yet but he can go that route if he wants. She talks to him in a near death experience for him, I guess, and talks him into keep going, and he wakses up and finds water and some tree stars nearby and so is able to live.